MissouriPicker Posted August 23, 2016 Share Posted August 23, 2016 Briefly----played on the Hummingbird. Pretty much a true story (with some "writer's license" to fit it all into a song) about someone I knew when I was a kid in the 50's and when he was an old guy who played guitar in the 60's. The instrumental is "Wayfarin' Stranger." The favorite song of his wife's was "You are my sunshine," but I couldn't record it on a CD because of copyright laws, so used a public domain song instead...... This is the very first mix from the studio. Did it all in two takes. Haven't yet done any editing, etc. of any tracks, aside from getting some early volume levels. Not sure if I'll keep it or drop it from the CD..... Anyway, here's how I knew Ben Richards. Mr. Richards by Larry Garrett Mr. Richards was a neighbor who lived down the street. Just an old man fightin' old age and he was gettin' beat. Late at night in the summer time he'd go out in his backyard, Sit in a lawn chair, sing and play his guitar. Some folks used to laugh....guess they thought it was funny, But my mama said "He's lonely and he misses his honey," So at night I'd lay in bed and listen through the window screen As his voice and guitar drifted on the summer breeze. Chorus..... And he'd sing Oh Susanna, My Darlin' Clementine, Blue Bayou, You're Cheatin' Heart, and I Walk the Line. And as the Midnight Hour descended upon him, he sang an old gospel hymn. Well, one night I got home late and he was still out there, So I walked down to his yard and I pulled-up a chair. He said "I know folks are talkin' cause I come out here at night, But since my Emma died that house just don't feel right." He said "Hearin' these songs put a smile on Emma's face And I swear I'll sing again to her in a better place. But for now these songs bring great pain to me, Ahhh, but pains a cheap price to pay for my memories." Chorus......and instrumental Got a call from mom yesterday, her and dad are fine. They bought a big screen TV, I said "It's about time." She said "Tom's wife had the baby. Tom's grinnin' with pride. Then quietly she said "Son, Mr. Richards died." Bridge...... So tonight I'm recalling that night from years ago When he told me how he loved her and how it hurt to let her go. Well, I know that he's gone, but there's a smile upon my face, Because I know he's singing to her now in that better place. Chorus...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murph Posted August 23, 2016 Share Posted August 23, 2016 Great story Larry. I really mean that. Fiddle and flute? I'm very happy for your project, and enjoying it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwalker201 Posted August 23, 2016 Share Posted August 23, 2016 That was very nice Larry. The added instruments blended very well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duluthdan Posted August 23, 2016 Share Posted August 23, 2016 Love the entry of the fragile violin music. Interesting song, interesting story. I can't wait to hear your whole new project. [thumbup] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salfromchatham Posted August 24, 2016 Share Posted August 24, 2016 This song is beautiful. The roundabout way your mom telling you he died... A moment. A beautiful tribute to a man kind of in your side vision. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buc McMaster Posted August 24, 2016 Share Posted August 24, 2016 Well you're quite the story teller, Larry........yes sir! Just enough detail woven into the lyric to paint a true picture of your memory. Well done, sir, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidblast Posted August 24, 2016 Share Posted August 24, 2016 very nice Larry This... But for now these songs bring great pain to me, Ahhh, but pains a cheap price to pay for my memories excellent!!! violin, adds nice touch... the flute.. brilliant! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lars68 Posted August 24, 2016 Share Posted August 24, 2016 Any relation??? Lars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnneS Posted August 24, 2016 Share Posted August 24, 2016 Aw, that is a fine portraiture, Larry. You showed us a very real thing right there. Beautiful slice of life- Johnny Cash'd be real proud. Just lovely--I vote "Keep!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blindboygrunt Posted August 24, 2016 Share Posted August 24, 2016 That's great MP Your musics really sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kelly campbell Posted August 24, 2016 Share Posted August 24, 2016 Great job MP I agree with Anne it is a keeper. Very Pleasant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissouriPicker Posted August 24, 2016 Author Share Posted August 24, 2016 Once again, my friends, thank you for all the comments. I'm always open to suggestions and advice, so never think I'd be offended, etc. Lars, no not related to the Mr. Richards in the REM song. Never heard that song before and I can't understand what they're saying and not interested enough in it to listen a second time...lol... Nothing personal. I'm sure it's a generation thing..........My wife thinks I should keep the song on the CD. There's a good chance I will. The problem is I'm now up to 14 songs and just finished a new one I'd like to add, so who-the-hell knows?...lol...I sure don't. My studio guy is in Colorado at the moment. Hope to get with him at least a couple more times before he heads to the Winfield, Ks. festival in September. I'm not in a major rush to finish. No particular time limit on this project. I figure I'll be finished late September to mid-October. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bayoubengal1954 Posted August 25, 2016 Share Posted August 25, 2016 I just now got to give it a listen, Larry. Great song and great job by everyone on the performance, especially your heartfelt vocals and clean fingerpicking! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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