olie Posted November 13, 2019 Share Posted November 13, 2019 Watch out Lars; before you know it this song could turn out to be a musical zebra - a horse designed by a committee.🤗 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lars68 Posted November 13, 2019 Author Share Posted November 13, 2019 37 minutes ago, olie said: Watch out Lars; before you know it this song could turn out to be a musical zebra - a horse designed by a committee.🤗 Well put! Well, I asked for input and I got it, so I'm not complaining. Also, I don't want to dismiss anyone taking the time to listen to my song, read my lyrics and post comments. All input has been valuable, but mostly because it sparked my mind into thinking harder. In the end, I'm not looking to please anyone but me. Of all the input given to me regarding lyrical choices, my two main take aways from this thread are the value of word ecenomy, "less is more", and not to be lazy with my English skills (when in doubt, there is probably a better and more precise word to be found, if I use online dictionaries etc). So I think I have learned a few things, which made this particular song a little bit better, but might make the next one even better. Also, I enjoy the search for the elusive idea of "perfection", even though I have a loooong way to go... Lars Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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