Just started writing. What do you think?

[MWGuitarman]

I play alone in my basement. I've always wanted to try writing. These are my first three attempts. I lay the drums down on the computer where I want them but I play both guitar parts when there is two and I also have a digitech RP250 that lets me record my 6 string electric as a bass, so that's me playing the simple bass lines as well. I'm pretty excited and wanted to get some feedback. They're very short tracks, but it's a start.

Each of the three tracks has a very different feel.

 

http://www.myspace.com/breakingfromyesterday

[brad1]

Not bad MW!

However the first one, sleepwalking, almost put me to sleep. I like the other two more. I like the "string squeaks" you can hear on the 3rd song as your fingers slide on the strings.

Good job! ;)

[MWGuitarman]

Not bad MW!

However the first one' date=' sleepwalking, almost put me to sleep. I like the other two more. I like the "string squeaks" you can hear on the 3rd song as your fingers slide on the strings.

Good job! [/quote']

 

Thanks man. Yeah, the repeating hypnotic song was written at 1:00 in the morning and I was really tired. I think I went into a trance while writing it, hence the name "sleep walking" It's not the type of music I normally play, just what came out at the moment.

[stan 58]

Sounds like Santa needs to bring you a bass for X-mas!! Your on your way to one man band status, thats the way i roll. Keep writing and have some fun=d> Stan.

[lespaulplaya]

"Another One" was awesome.I only dream of the day when I will be able to play something cool.

[MWGuitarman]

"Another One" was awesome.I only dream of the day when I will be able to play something cool.

 

Thanks man. No one has ever heard my stuff prior to my putting it out there so I wasn't sure if it didn't suck or if it was near likeable.

[MWGuitarman]

Sounds like Santa needs to bring you a bass for X-mas!! Your on your way to one man band status' date=' thats the way i roll. Keep writing and have some fun=d> Stan.[/quote']

 

Maybe I'll save up enough coin to buy a Bass.