slavestate Posted July 21, 2012 Share Posted July 21, 2012 Just finished a track with a buddy of mine. We're hopping to record some more and get out and gig. Feedback and criticism would be awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
surfpup Posted July 22, 2012 Share Posted July 22, 2012 Feedback and criticism would be awesome! You asked for it... I thought the intro was pointless and lame... discordant too and not in a good way Once it got to the main riff I actually quite liked it. The vocal line shows promise (though the singer needs a bit of practice). I noticed that the last few minutes were very uniform - there were no dynamics. I could slide the play bar from place to place on the track and it all sounded very much the same. You should find some places to be more dynamic: bring it down... then back up. Pick the changes subtlety for a few bars then go back to banging them. Bring the vocals down then back to a frenzy. There is the meat of a good song there though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riffster Posted July 22, 2012 Share Posted July 22, 2012 I like the track in general, the intro needs some work, while I get what you were trying to do is not coming across. Vocals are good and the guitar tones are great and well played, the track does need a bit more dynamics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slavestate Posted July 22, 2012 Author Share Posted July 22, 2012 Awesome! Thank you for comments. We're just playing hypnotic down tuned heavy stuff. There aren't too many dynamics involved other than heavy. It's definitely a roundabout type of song. The intro was more or less a tid-bit to add some overall length to the main riffs. We've got more writing to do and most songs will be between the 5-10 minute range. Mostly in vein of early 70's heavy rock with a bit of mysticism involved. More to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slavestate Posted July 26, 2012 Author Share Posted July 26, 2012 A collage was to the uploaded video. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D28boy Posted July 26, 2012 Share Posted July 26, 2012 Main riff sounds like early Sabbath rip off to me folks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slavestate Posted July 26, 2012 Author Share Posted July 26, 2012 Main riff sounds like early Sabbath rip off to me folks. You outta listen more carefully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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