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I would love to hear feedback on this song, as I really like it but that doesn't matter much, I'm too close to it. Does anyone else? Mind you, again, this is just a work tape. I definitely would like to do this with full band, I have some cool ideas for it.

 

https://soundcloud.com/bill-pittman/paging-mr-page

 

P. S. Go right now and listen... and after you hear it... come back and scroll down and read my last question. Don't read it now... go listen first! Thanks!

 

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I hear "pick slap" as I play the guitar, this is a very busy song, guitar-wise. I tend to hold the pick a little too lightly. Plus, I could've probably used a quieter pick. Check it out, did/does this bother you? Did you pick up on it before I told you?

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Sounds like a good song with a personal relevance. The playing and singing were good. The guitar sound was a bit tinny and compressed. I am sure it was capoed up a few. I believe with some backing tracks it would 'come alive'.....FWIW and IMHO. Overall, I like the story!

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Cool song! I didn't notice any "pick click". What instruments are you hearing? This is a good as a solo song too, Bill. Tip o' the hat. [thumbup]

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