Lars68 Posted December 8, 2019 Share Posted December 8, 2019 (edited) Here is a song I have been messing with for quite some time. It's about constantly fighting for the important things in life, and never taking them for granted during the short time we are given. It has got a couple of attempts at a few firsts for me, like alternating rhyming lines, two time signatures, and an attempt at some more powerful vocals on the chorus, and even some heavy drums too 😀 It's a very odd song... THE NORTHERN STAR VERSE 1 the hour glass is broken and time falls to the floor too many words unspoken while I'm trapped behind closed doors no the sand won't pull back it covers all I've forsaken maybe it's the effort I lack or the wrong road I've taken CHORUS so throw away the maps and keys to where we are pack our bags boys and catch the Northern...the Northern Star. VERSE 2 our new town shall be unknown and our street without a name pure seeds will be sown for our love to remain I wanna make it up to you for the time lost between the most beautiful two boys I have ever seen CHORUS so throw away the maps and keys to where we are pack our bags boys and catch the Northern...the Northern Star. Lars Edited December 8, 2019 by Lars68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kelly campbell Posted December 12, 2019 Share Posted December 12, 2019 Nicely done Lars.. I like it. keep up the good work... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lars68 Posted December 12, 2019 Author Share Posted December 12, 2019 2 hours ago, kelly campbell said: Nicely done Lars.. I like it. keep up the good work... Thanks a bunch! Not exactly the most accessible song I've ever written, so thanks for listening. Lars Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murph Posted December 14, 2019 Share Posted December 14, 2019 Dig it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lars68 Posted December 14, 2019 Author Share Posted December 14, 2019 1 hour ago, Murph said: Dig it... 👏 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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