Silenced Fred Posted July 3, 2011 Share Posted July 3, 2011 Heavily influenced by old City and Colour/ Dallas Green. It helped me get over some stuff and I feel better. It was all recorded in one take, guitar and vocals on same mic, so I can't make the vocals any more prominent so it works like this I guess New song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Posted July 3, 2011 Share Posted July 3, 2011 I liked it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riffster Posted July 3, 2011 Share Posted July 3, 2011 Good song, funny how you sound like that one voice Jack White does when he is in a sort of narrative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stein Posted July 3, 2011 Share Posted July 3, 2011 Fuzz, that is good stuff. I could hear the words, I could FEEL where you are coming from, and I could feel something from the tune. Honestly, writing a song that is as direct as that one with no "mystery" in the lyrics where what you say is what you mean is a rarity to have it be a "good" song. You got some talent there. Good guitar work, your playing on that serves the tune and you deliver it. And GREAT melody on the vocal. Jus sayin'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duende Posted July 3, 2011 Share Posted July 3, 2011 Honestly, writing a song that is as direct as that one with no "mystery" in the lyrics where what you say is what you mean is a rarity to have it be a "good" song. well put and also nice job Fred Matt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silenced Fred Posted July 3, 2011 Author Share Posted July 3, 2011 Thanks guys! I was really worried about the vocals because... Well... I didn't write anything down. I felt comfortable, and I think they have been my best yet. The song still needs some work, completed structure, but I like it so far. Im gonna go get some studio time before I leave so a pro recording will be on the way in less than a month Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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