Johnson Blake Posted March 11 Share Posted March 11 This was my first song of 2024 written on the second day of 2024 - I wanted to start off the year right proper-like. With two high visibility persons currently vying for the same high visibility position, their age is a big talking point amongst those who talk points. However, my impetus for writing the song was because last year the federal govt. officially deemed me "elderly", so I felt rightly qualified to pen these lines. comments are welcome, feedback helps a writer to improve...thanks for listening, hope you enjoy listening to it as much as I enjoyed writing it https://youtu.be/LzIb5Ja_Z4g 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DanvillRob Posted March 11 Share Posted March 11 Good stuff! But your guitar has the pickguard on the wrong side of the sound hole, (not to mention that it's tuned one semi-tone flat). I really enjoyed it! 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scriv58 Posted March 11 Share Posted March 11 My aunt often said that as well...must be a thing good song I liked the bubbles floating out of the sound hole in the break 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risco Posted March 12 Share Posted March 12 Nice job! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red 333 Posted March 14 Share Posted March 14 Very good, young man! Red 333 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murph Posted March 15 Share Posted March 15 Rub some dirt on it. Well played, Blake. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrairieDog Posted March 16 Share Posted March 16 Nice!!! Commiserating chuckles out loud at some of the lines 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnson Blake Posted March 23 Author Share Posted March 23 Thanks for the comments - and now that you mention it, DanvillRob, the pickguard surely does appear to be somewhat misplaced... Murph, on what do you recommend rubbing some dirt? Just so I know... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissouriPicker Posted March 26 Share Posted March 26 Nicely done, my friend. I like it a lot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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